急!!!英文文法修改 - 暖化

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Are you think about holding by your hand is a estrangement stone not a mouse?
When you enjoy the air conditioning,some organism are died,
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其實要翻的是這兩段
跟上述不太一樣
•由於近年來資訊時代氾濫 人與人之間的互動漸漸的依賴電腦 少了最直接最真誠的接觸 所以利用滑鼠和冷冰冰的石頭作結合 來諷刺這個時代人心疏離的現象
•全球暖化導致物種瀕臨滅絕 以"享受殺生"為題 諷刺人們在享受科技的同時 也吹出了許多物種的亡魂
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Elma avatarElma2012-01-06
Are you thinking about holding by your hands is an estrangement stone but not a mouse?

When you turn on the air-condition, the environment is destroyed at the same time,
因為不太知道你想要表達的意思是什麼,第二句的部分,就算文法對了,但是意思仍然不對,所以幫你改了一下 ,至於第一句真的看不懂你想表達的,所以就幫你改了文法的部分!一起加油吧!
Christine avatarChristine2012-01-02
這,說實話已經不是“文法”的問題了。。。
這...根本連“意思”都整個亂了。。。
我勸你還是中文 PO 上來,比較好讓人翻譯...
Selena avatarSelena2012-01-06
prisoner26535謝謝!!
Regina avatarRegina2012-01-04
Are you reckoning, holding in your hand, if it is a estrangement stone but not a dead mouse?
While you are enjoying the air conditioning, some microbes are being killed!