※ 引述《jamesinjames (小海豚)》之銘言：
: In the begging, please allow me to use poor English to type, mainly
^^^^^^^^^^ did u mean 'beginning?'
: because I want to improve my English more.
: Yesterday after finish the long day blue mountain, the Janpeness friend and I
finishing
: decide to went to the China town to find something interesting and something
decided to go
: of the living supple, I want to but the port portter and my Janpeness
^^^^^^^^^^^^^?? ^ where's your verb??
: friend want to but the ear pick, so we start to have a adventure in the China
^^^ did u mean 'buy'? started an
: Town... and finally I found my meat and he also find his ear pick,
^^^^^^^ ur meat@@!! found
: and jsut find a Chinese restaurant to have a meal, then we jsut walk on the
found walked
(ur sentence is too long..too many commas..hoo)
: street which located on the cross of Geroge St and poolreiver St...
^is (or omit which+is)
: when wejsut ask someone about how to get to the China town...
asked ^^^deleted
: there are two pretty women, with the brown hair and pretty smile
were ^^^delete smiles
: looks like the local Australia girl, and they just ask me:
looked ^^^delete asked
: Excuse me, can you do me a favor ? ...
: During that moment I had been one day long walk ... and that sounds like
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
sorry i cant get your point.... sounded
: want to borrowed money or something cheat, defraud...
borrow
: so I jsut directly say...maybe not... and go away she still stand there and
said went ^(.) stood
: say WHY ? ...
said
: After I came back I feel sorry to act so cold to people, maybe I should
felt
: tell them to request the police... but during that moment I am so tired
was
: So I just reject, but I still very curious aboout ... what kinds of help
rejected them (+ object) about ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: are they looking for help ? Does anyone have meet this situation ?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^
just revise it .. double verb. or you can say
'Has anyone met this situ. before?'
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竟然變成認真魔人了= =
不過我只改了文法部份
語意還有太長的句子 文章結構我都沒有改了
ㄟ斗 板主改文章就這麼一次了阿
看在你很用功想練習英文的心意
不過要練習英文可以去Engtalk板喔
那邊有人可以幫你訂正
可以互相切磋
補個啾咪^.<
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: In the begging, please allow me to use poor English to type, mainly
^^^^^^^^^^ did u mean 'beginning?'
: because I want to improve my English more.
: Yesterday after finish the long day blue mountain, the Janpeness friend and I
finishing
: decide to went to the China town to find something interesting and something
decided to go
: of the living supple, I want to but the port portter and my Janpeness
^^^^^^^^^^^^^?? ^ where's your verb??
: friend want to but the ear pick, so we start to have a adventure in the China
^^^ did u mean 'buy'? started an
: Town... and finally I found my meat and he also find his ear pick,
^^^^^^^ ur meat@@!! found
: and jsut find a Chinese restaurant to have a meal, then we jsut walk on the
found walked
(ur sentence is too long..too many commas..hoo)
: street which located on the cross of Geroge St and poolreiver St...
^is (or omit which+is)
: when wejsut ask someone about how to get to the China town...
asked ^^^deleted
: there are two pretty women, with the brown hair and pretty smile
were ^^^delete smiles
: looks like the local Australia girl, and they just ask me:
looked ^^^delete asked
: Excuse me, can you do me a favor ? ...
: During that moment I had been one day long walk ... and that sounds like
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
sorry i cant get your point.... sounded
: want to borrowed money or something cheat, defraud...
borrow
: so I jsut directly say...maybe not... and go away she still stand there and
said went ^(.) stood
: say WHY ? ...
said
: After I came back I feel sorry to act so cold to people, maybe I should
felt
: tell them to request the police... but during that moment I am so tired
was
: So I just reject, but I still very curious aboout ... what kinds of help
rejected them (+ object) about ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: are they looking for help ? Does anyone have meet this situation ?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^
just revise it .. double verb. or you can say
'Has anyone met this situ. before?'
=====
竟然變成認真魔人了= =
不過我只改了文法部份
語意還有太長的句子 文章結構我都沒有改了
ㄟ斗 板主改文章就這麼一次了阿
看在你很用功想練習英文的心意
不過要練習英文可以去Engtalk板喔
那邊有人可以幫你訂正
可以互相切磋
補個啾咪^.<
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