我這有兩段英文小短句 是寫有關空氣污染的改善問題
由於這兩句英文是我自已翻的
我不知道文法或單字上有沒有錯誤
希望英文厲害的大大能幫我修正
我有付上我想表達的中文意思
如有不通順的地方還麻煩各位幫忙改一下
謝謝~
〈拒絕翻譯機和翻譯網〉
1.因為空氣污染對我們是不好的，如果要有良好的空氣，我們就要從自己做起，並且一步一步的去改善。
Because air pollution is not good for people. If have good air, we should do it from us, and step by step to improve.
2.因為改善空氣污染是很重要的，每個國家應該要像新加坡一樣那樣做，我想這樣我們才會有良好的空氣。
Because to improve air pollution is very important. Every country should like to Singapore to do it. I think we if do it, we have good air.
由於這兩句英文是我自已翻的
我不知道文法或單字上有沒有錯誤
希望英文厲害的大大能幫我修正
我有付上我想表達的中文意思
如有不通順的地方還麻煩各位幫忙改一下
謝謝~
〈拒絕翻譯機和翻譯網〉
1.因為空氣污染對我們是不好的，如果要有良好的空氣，我們就要從自己做起，並且一步一步的去改善。
Because air pollution is not good for people. If have good air, we should do it from us, and step by step to improve.
2.因為改善空氣污染是很重要的，每個國家應該要像新加坡一樣那樣做，我想這樣我們才會有良好的空氣。
Because to improve air pollution is very important. Every country should like to Singapore to do it. I think we if do it, we have good air.
All Comments
Because air pollution is not good for people. If have good air, we should do it from us, and step by step to improve.
==>你可以改成 Because air pollution is not good for us, if we'd like to have clean air, we must try our best to solve the problem. What we need to do is to check our behaviour and improve the situation step by step.
2.因為改善空氣污染是很重要的，每個國家應該要像新加坡一樣那樣做，我想這樣我們才會有良好的空氣。
Because to improve air pollution is very important. Every country should like to Singapore to do it. I think we if do it, we have good air.
==>你可以改成Imporving the problem of air pollution is very important, so I think all the countries around the world should take the actions as what Singapore did. Then, we'll have clean air accordingly.
It is very important to improve air pollution,every country should do it as Singapore.I think that we will have good air.
(不知翻ㄉok不ok ^^)