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Ethan avatarEthan · 2010-02-21

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這是一篇說明概念產品的小短文，在下已有照著自己的意思寫了一次。但恐文法及句型結構有誤，還請熱心人士不吝指教。感謝==========Theelectricitymeterareoftensetinthepublicarea.Wecanonlyfindouthowmuchweshouldpayfortheelectricitywhenthebillarrived.So,wehaveanideaofsettingupanelectricitymeterathome,thereforepeoplewillbeabletoknowhowmuchelectricitythey&a
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William avatarWilliam2010-02-21
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Belly avatarBelly2010-02-23
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