請問:幫我英文檢查文法 - 空氣污染

Air PollutionIn Taiwan, there are a lot of regions polluted by air pollution.Nowadays, because some factories discharge waste vapor into air, the ozonosphere is destroyed so ultraviolet rays effect higher and higher. If it is raining, do not get wet in the rain. In case you get wet in the rain, you must take a shower immediately because the rain with acidity matter called “Acid Rain”. Otherwise, you will become bald.I hope everyone can observe and prevent the air pollution. Let our country exist, not disappear. Not so, we will have no country which belongs to us. That's my exception.空氣污染在台灣，有許多地區污染藉著空氣污染。因為現今一些工廠排放廢煙往天空。臭氧層被破壞所以紫外線越來越高。下雨，最好不要淋雨。如果你淋雨，你必須趕快洗澡。因為雨有酸性物質叫酸雨。不然你會變禿頭。我希望每個人能遵守和預防停止空氣污染。讓我們國家存在不要消失。不然，我們會沒有屬與自己的國家。這是我的期許。

Air PollutionThere're lots of regions polluted by air pollution in Taiwan.Because nowadays some factories discharge waste vapor into air. The ozonosphere was destroyed and the ultraviolet rays more and more high.You had better not drench if it rains;you must take a shower quickly,if you get wet.   Because the rain has an acid matter called“Acid Rain”. No so, you will become a bald man.I hope everyone can observe and  prevent from  the air pollution.Let our nation exist and don't disappear . Not so, we will lost it. That's my expectation.

Air Pollution~
In Taiwan, lots of areas are polluted as a result of air pollution. This is caused by factories discharging waste into the air. The ozonosphere has been damaged, therefore increasing ultraviolet radiation. When raining, it is better not to expose ourselves to the rain. If you get wet in the rain, clean up quickly as the acid matter in the acid rain can make you go bald.
I hope everyone can be made aware and help reduce air pollution, allowing our country to exist. Otherwise, we will not have a country of our own. This is my wish.