請幫我翻譯這段英文Birdscanlive..... - 暖化

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在未來世界裡,鳥兒可在水中生活,
如果我們不停止地球暖化的話,
這恐將成為真實。
Birds can live underwater in future.
If we con't stop Global Warming,it could be ture.
喔 請幫忙我修改看這句話
Update:
抱歉我是想問我這句英文的文法是否正確
因為想寫簡單點 

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Sarah avatarSarah2008-12-31
In future of our world, the birds will have the ability to live under the water.
If we cannot stop the Global Warming this could be true.
你的ture打錯了(true)
稍微修改一下
你的也很不錯,只是太簡短了一點
看你要用哪一個
Kristin avatarKristin2008-12-28
If we don't stop from keeping warming our planet, the birds maight be able to live in the water and this could probably came true in the future.
這樣翻是否更貼切?
歡迎指教
Hedda avatarHedda2008-12-30
In the future world, the bird may live in the water, if we do not stop the Earth warms, this will be fear that it may become really.
我看不太懂妳為啥要修改
你寫的也是可以啊~~
future前要the吧
我寫這樣叫接近你得中文意思
2008-12-28 00:56:05 補充:
你是要改中文還是英文啊??
2008-12-28 00:58:58 補充:
抱歉我沒看到題目標題....抱歉
Linda avatarLinda2008-12-30
你好你好!!
這是我修改過後的句子:
In the world in future, the bird can live in the water,
If we do not stop the Earth warming,
This perhaps will become reality.
希望這樣有幫到你的忙!!
Bennie avatarBennie2009-01-01
在未來世界裡,鳥兒可在水中生活,
如果我們不停止地球暖化的話,這恐將成為真實。
我不知道要修改什麼....只是照自己翻譯...
Daniel avatarDaniel2008-12-31
Birds can live underwater on the future.
2008-12-28 00:44:09 補充:
If we con't stop Global Warming,it could be ture.